I've studied a little Medieval History over the last year, and have introduced some of the more interesting things into the story. Two of the major cities have been somewhat fleshed out, but still need work to truly be brought alive. One story, Black Wolf, is being re-written in a way that most is being told by the main character to another, explaining events up until their meeting.
Some races and characters have been re-named or straight out removed, and the Age of Awakening history is being changed slightly so that events make more sense, and link things together more smoothly.
Finally, I'm planning to draw up some flow charts for my own purposes to explain the political and personal relationships between various nobles in both the main nation of Daguran, and the Mori'Ylaih city of Darenthel, where such political struggles will give the story more depth.
So, yes, another series of heavy editing is being performed, which might delay a finished story once again, /sigh







Just passed by... Lovely stuff
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Where's your anger now?..."
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I draw wings because I believe people have the power to fly. I draw them on half-naked girls because I believe I'm a pervert.
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